Constructive Criticism is greatly appreciated! :)

I finally decided to contribute something to the brony community! I made it my goal to make something before season 2. This if the first song I've made in about 5 years, and the first song I've ever made using FL Studio, which I really like so far. However, I was forced to "paint" the modulation of the wind effects instead of it being automated, so sorry if that sounds a little sketch at times. Hopefully you get what I was going for. :/
Oh yeah, if you took the time to read this, then here's another song I made in contrast to this one: www.youtube.com/watch?...

Edit::
You want download? You GOT download...BAM! www.mediafire.com/?12e...

Anyway, here's the pics! v v v
-1st and 3rd:
mlp.wikia.com/wiki/The...
-2nd:
shelltoontv.deviantart...
-4th:
felixattchar.deviantar...
-5th:
ns4j19y.deviantart.com...
-(6th is same as 1st) :/
-last:
rainbowdashpegasi.devi...

P.S.
Big thanks to Renard for inspiring me to actually make music again!